FINALLY!

I finally presented my photo essay today and received my self reflection back. I thought that I would never get a chance to present since class is over in a week. I did though, and I did well on it too! Thank goodness! I'm glad that I've improved as the semester has gone on. Not once have I gotten a worse grade than the paper before. It makes me feel accomplished when I improve on every paper. I really like writing and I would really like to be a journalist but I know that I'm not THAT good. Oh well, I'll just stick with marketing or something like that!

Peer Editing

Even though I thought that my first rough draft was good, I realized that I still have a lot of work to do on it. After reading of it and reading the comments left by my peers I thought about a lot of new things that I should do to rework the paper. I need to put more of my opinion into the paper and put more feeling into it. I know that I can make my paper much better. Our second rough draft is due a week from today so I should get working on that so I can make it much better than this copy.

First Draft

Our first draft of our final paper is due tomorrow. I have completed it and I feel that I have a good thesis and that it is going in the right direction. Of course I have a ton of work to put into it still, but I hope that it will eventually turn out really good. This paper is kind of a make or break for my grade so I need to push myself to continue to edit and rework it to make it GREAT! :]